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| Veritas; CRAZY FIGHTING ELEMENTAL MARTIAL ARTS | |
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| Topic Started: Dec 16 2008, 02:51 AM (7,288 Views) | |
| The Second Hokage | Dec 16 2008, 02:51 AM Post #1 |
EDO TENSAI BI*CHS
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This manga caught my intrest after my continuios head palm thrusts from naruto and bleaches sudden lack of flare Anyways Basicly The main character gets trained by this guy after the guy beats up like 9 dudes at once and the kid pesters him into training him. The guy messe around with the kid a little then teaches him the basics of his familys secret martial art witch allows him to use somke crazy metal element/ lightning punch anyways after teaching him the basics the guy leaves and tells his studenthe may se him someday but dont count on it... A year latter the kids in highschool and these dudes from this organiztion come and tell him his masters dead and that they killed him they then proced to beat him up and take him to this school were other crazy elemental supernatral martial arts students are there with there own familys secret technique.. Its pretty good once you check it out im sure youll be intrsted i read it at onemanga |
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| Mjelke | Dec 16 2008, 01:52 PM Post #2 |
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I read whats on onemanga and the artwork is great, reminds me of the more well drawn parts of worst. But the story is very weak IMO, and a majority of the characters lacks any sign of depth or appeal. The protagonist for one is probably one of the most boring characters of all time. He has practically no relations with anyone other then with his dead master the rest are people forcing themselves on him, he wants to become strong for no other reason then that he wants to be strong and with no apparant goal and other then him facing some obstacles and opposition from the school counsil (which I guess is the supposed to be the motor in all this) it doesnt bother him one bit and he just goes around fighting people and beeing a general a$$ and everyone around him just cruises along not doin much besides licking or kicking his a$$ with no other purpuse then to give the protagonist screentime which is used to show the protagonist do the same thing hes been doing since chapter 1 frame 1. That sounded very negative and I really think it is like that, but despite these flaws its all fairly entertaining. Its also "interesting" how the author doesnt seem to be afraid to time skip a few weeks or months when the protagonist is doing something booring or is injured. This emphasises the fact that this story is all about some braindead guy who does his own thing is kicking a$$ in the face of adversory. |
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| saan | Dec 16 2008, 04:35 PM Post #3 |
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Never have I come across a manga where I wanted to personally beat the crap out of most of the antagonists... Truly piss me off for obvous reasons.. but why to such an extent? No idea... Shame they arent gonna get killed off or anything... thatd be great.. |
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| the kraken | Dec 17 2008, 04:25 PM Post #4 |
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i think the art i really good but the story sucks. it is somewhat entertaining though. however it shouldn't go beyond 30 chapters because the story is weak. |
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| The Second Hokage | Dec 18 2008, 12:00 AM Post #5 |
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EDO TENSAI BI*CHS
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thats why this manga caught my attenchion the randomness it brought was fascinating the whole break down of the powers is wat really kept my intrest the steel soul dude was crazy |
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| Dasbones | Dec 24 2008, 01:50 PM Post #6 |
Sup kids
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If the manga keeps the artist but hires a new writer, this manga could be great... they should also change the main character's name... like now |
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| Kartoon-Man | Dec 24 2008, 09:35 PM Post #7 |
Blue Blues
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Four more chapters came out. Completing the dark fight into him using his trump card for the first time. I got to say I liked the fight. He doesn't really have a solid dream or anything to go to besides him wanting to get strong and probably avenging his master but it's good enough. It has a lot of potential though, to be a plain fighting type manga. Doesn't really have much to fuel it except for fighting and getting stronger. |
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| Dasbones | Dec 25 2008, 12:03 AM Post #8 |
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The story is starting to improve, but really, they need to come up with better names or characters, it's really bugging me. |
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| Mjelke | Dec 25 2008, 06:51 AM Post #9 |
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His name really stinks. But its a Korean name isnt it? Since its a mahwa. And the weak story aside, the fights are pretty cool. I liked these new updates. |
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| Dynamic Entry | Dec 25 2008, 09:29 AM Post #10 |
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Wow i truly loved this manga. i liked the random bits and pieces like tekken and her power being over nine thousand. the plot is wonderfull i thought, and the fighting is a heck of a whole lot better then naruto's thats for sure, it really keeps you on your feet. on a lighter note, i wish they had more color images for select pages heh. |
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| The Second Hokage | Dec 31 2008, 04:16 PM Post #11 |
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EDO TENSAI BI*CHS
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the storys gettin better they just need the plot to build up and we may have a real popular manga on our hands i hope for the best thunder break was the s*** |
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| the kraken | Jan 4 2009, 04:21 PM Post #12 |
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there are actually some very popular aspects to this story like the super natural martial arts theme. naruto,bleach and DBZ all have that theme. which is why i think it is so entertaining in some ways. |
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| saan | Jan 6 2009, 09:16 AM Post #13 |
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I hope the main character just beats the crap out of everyone... I think this manga will be great just because they've made the enemies so unlikable that you want them to have the crap beat out of them. Artificial chi is an interesting concept... they should bottle that... Though I did like the twist on how the main character is holding himself back, he's actually fairly smart it seems... compared to his initial impressions anyways... |
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| The Second Hokage | Jan 7 2009, 11:09 PM Post #14 |
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yeah this manga just seems like its going to get rediculous im 100 percent stoked 4 sum more veritas chaps and i toally feel ya on how u want the main character to just woopm up on everyone id like to se a couple of those preps get there faces smashed |
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| Kartoon-Man | Jan 21 2009, 10:27 AM Post #15 |
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Somehow I feel Guhoo's from fairy tail. He looks like Luxus and has a tattoo on his left chest that makes it look official. Seems like Magangryong's next attack would be able to take out Guhoo. Can't wait to see the level of power and also the training for that. |
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| JediKnight | Jan 26 2009, 06:41 PM Post #16 |
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@The SecondHokage Thank you for introducing me to veritas. It is a great and unique manga. I'm a fan now. |
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| saan | Jan 27 2009, 05:01 PM Post #17 |
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Never in a manga have I wanted a the main character to follow the typical shonen story and simply overpower everyone completely. Its just so easy to hate the antagonists... they're so... antagonizing... Ive never gone to any anime/manga conventions and now I have to make sure I dont because I might beat up on people dressed up as them... no but I like that they piss me off so much |
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| Ushi-U-Saru | Jan 27 2009, 06:05 PM Post #18 |
chaca chaca chaca chaca chaca chaca cha
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I liked the way they set up the power. Purity vs. Amount. Somebody can have a small amount of ki but if they purify it they can fight on par with those who have a massive amount of ki. Alternatively you can gain a large amount of ki and not have to waste time purifying it, especially since the more you have the harder it is to purify. |
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| Dynamic Entry | Jan 28 2009, 11:42 PM Post #19 |
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it was 27 odd pages but man it seemed short. arg now i want to see that fight!!!!!! |
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| Alpine | Jan 29 2009, 11:01 AM Post #20 |
Chuunin
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As saan said its really interesting how the author made antagonists so bloody annoying that I enjoyed Rud provocations directed to Guhoo, even though he is the least irritating of them (the girl accompanying him for example needs some good beating). Anyhow I think i read somewhere this manga is on chapter 50 or so, maybe we get a few additional chapters next time. |
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| The Second Hokage | Jan 29 2009, 12:18 PM Post #21 |
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chapter 50 damn i better see sum an upgraded eotl by now guhoo would let himself get so provoked still hes dope as f*** iron soul is still one of the dopest sounding manga powers ever imo.. Rud better be just as dope with his ability if not doper and as 4 dude thats rivaled lightning tiger he seems like hes gonna make a very nice antagonized just callin out whoever fake earth beast tis guy just dgafs |
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| Dynamic Entry | Jan 29 2009, 08:25 PM Post #22 |
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wow chapter 18 came out fast. it was a good fight i guess. more of a stalemate. |
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| Ushi-U-Saru | Jan 29 2009, 09:18 PM Post #23 |
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Really? Looked to me like Rud was in control the entire time. It was obvious Rud would exploit the building's height as soon as he tossed Guhoo over the first time. Fun fight. Wonder if Guhoo will continue to be so easy. |
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| Dynamic Entry | Jan 30 2009, 12:53 AM Post #24 |
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well yeah. brains > brawn. but what is he going to do when he gets back up there? make him fall again? i dont think guhoo will fall for it again. so if rud cant scratch him, then theres no way to win. unless he is indeed holding an ace. |
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| Alpine | Jan 30 2009, 11:03 AM Post #25 |
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Well the battle is pretty much over, until Guhoo comes up someone who heard they are fighting will stop them since they are only allowed to fight officially. Anyhow I hope there are some variations in their fighting styles and not being just one trick ponies. |
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